All Comments on 'Questions Ch. 02'

good stuff cant wait to see her reaction to the gifts in her room.

I hope you grace us with their happily ever after. Your characters are funny and likeable, the story is witty, charming, sexy, and fun. Besides wanting more, I can't think of any way to make this series better.

A good story. I liked the characters and the pace of the story. I think she is ready for him as she did not ask for her ring back and told him to sell it. If she was thinking of her husband and just wanted to fuck her brother for awhile, she would keep the ring. She should be happy with the presents he bought and that is another way she should realize they should be together as a couple. He is looking for her happiness. Please continue and keep us guessing. 5 stars on both chapters. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Needs editing. The word i’m sure you meant was contemplation, not compilation.

"...and tried not to droll." Drool

And there is no such word as "alot"!!

I hope you write a conclusion to this. I also hope it is a HEA :-)

The inner dialogue is excellent. Spelling, yes, editor, please, or just a proof reader would be enough.

Overall very enjoyable!

Can't wait for more.

Where's part 3

Great story. Very funny and imaginatively brilliant!