All Comments on 'Quetzalcoatl Ch. 02'

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 13 years ago
Glad you're continuing this

Pretty good storyline, and premise.

Please keep going.

db412294db412294about 13 years ago
Good story

This is a well crafted story. You have the tension level cranked way up high. I could imagine this situation occurring if there were a major disaster. I hope mother and son survive, though I wonder if they will.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Good story........

I agree with the other comments, good story, great tension to it.........more please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
good going

good going but need more sex and nudity. there are some mistake also, when the stranger rape his mother and strip her panty it was seems like the son look first time his mothers pube arena. he saw his mom complete naked in previous part. mom nudity should be need more, want this new adam and eve love eachother more passionately. describe mothers face as a sex symbol actress, imagined mom look like Francesca annis and son like Kyle macLachlan in movie Dune, they are the most sexy mom son ever seen. waiting for this new Adam Eve..............

larry74403larry74403about 13 years ago
Please sir, can we have some more.

This is a great story. I can;t wait till you post part three.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fantastic

I'm certainly reading this to find out what happens from a post apocalyptic point of view rather than sexual. Sex is nice but the other stuff is better. Thanks champ.

CinnerCinnerover 11 years ago
I agree

Your story is sophisticated beyond the norm for this site. Incest stories have never appealed to me, but I can't get over the context that you have set up here! This is THRILLING!

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