All Comments on 'Quetzalcoatl Ch. 04'

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lori1969 about 13 years ago

Great story!

Really like the story so far and can't wait for more chapters. My only problem is......the chapters are too short! lol I like end of civilization storys and you hit it dead on with the Q-flu line. Waiting for the next one and thanks for a good read.

Eric_Shift about 13 years ago

Suspenseful

Yeap chapters are too short. When a chapter comes out, it's over too soon.

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

go on....adam eve

go on.....but need sex and passion for this new adam eve. give them oppetunity to produce children.

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I have had many comments over the years about how my characters or story endings are flawed, but that's on purpose. After twenty years with a large police department, I've learned that people are flawed and are constantly acting in ways that defy logic. It is that illogical me...

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