All Comments on 'Quetzalcoatl Ch. 07'

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Eric_Shift almost 13 years ago

Good chapter.

Two ways you can look at this story.

Either it sucks to be fighting for your life, or he gets his gorgeous mum.

Either way,I love this story.

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

Last hope of human race

nice going. like this so so much. you definitely brought something new, something wonderful. cant wait for the next. in future- the eve must be concieved because they are the last hope of this human race. the adam eve must be voyage at a lonely island and to a new life together and produce some children. they should be restore the new human race. and one thing more is love and sex between them must be more.

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

Nice

Just read the whole series over the afternoon and I must say well done. Eagerly awaiting more.

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