All Comments on 'Quetzalcoatl Ch. 09'

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larry74403 almost 13 years ago

Absolutly grand.

I will hate for this story to end. But all good things must at some point. Just promise me it will end with a bang.

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

GREAT CHAPTER

5 out of 5. Good to know tha cassio died. He deserved it. And josie can also go to hell. We don't want them. The last battle would be very interesting. Can't wait for the last chapter.

Eric_Shift almost 13 years ago

No sex,and with what you can usually come up with as to a hot sex scene, which is a crying shame...

But this chapter had some real power to it.

You are a bloody good writer and story teller, this chapter just goes to prove that. I'm sad that this is coming to an end, but I hope you get inspired with something else real soon.

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