All Comments on 'Quick Change'

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lordchilworthlordchilworthover 15 years ago
great first try

good pace, strong storyline, well told... well done. Now show your readers what your really naughty desires are.

CanadianSimsChickCanadianSimsChickover 15 years ago
Not bad!

It was really good... but a little back info on the characters would have been a good idea.

soomuchmoresoomuchmoreabout 15 years ago
short and sweet

It was quick and simple, nothing that sucks inbetween and not too long winded. More detail would have been nice though

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Wet

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