All Comments on 'Quickie - Boring Video Games'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Excellent!! Beautifully Written!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Loved It

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This is the best in this Quickie series

Perfect & Hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Any chance of a second part?? In love with Tisca Mummy!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

The length, the narration, the setting, everything is perfect

Really enjoyed reading this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Excellent... you should carry on with this series

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Happy to see you back in form!!!!

Neil’s storyline is the best among all your series. Very much enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

You're overly in love with alliteration. Not to mention hyperbole. There's likely a credible story beneath the both. Try it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

this deserves a sequel... the best story i have read in a long time... nothing extra ordinary about the scenario, but the way it is written makes it so much fun to read...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Very Good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

THIS WAS A VERY FUN READ!

REALLY DID NOT WANT THE STORY TO END, MAYBE YOU CAN WRITE ONE MORE ABOUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT BETWEEN NEIL AND TICSA.

THANK YOU

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Please write a second part. Really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Superb

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Complete the pending works first

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Erotica at its best

aebnialaaebnialaabout 2 years ago

Some call these stories: sexy shorts...

Qwiki is good also..

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