by brucewayneegypt
The length, the narration, the setting, everything is perfect
Really enjoyed reading this story
Happy to see you back in form!!!!
Neil’s storyline is the best among all your series. Very much enjoyable.
You're overly in love with alliteration. Not to mention hyperbole. There's likely a credible story beneath the both. Try it.
this deserves a sequel... the best story i have read in a long time... nothing extra ordinary about the scenario, but the way it is written makes it so much fun to read...
THIS WAS A VERY FUN READ!
REALLY DID NOT WANT THE STORY TO END, MAYBE YOU CAN WRITE ONE MORE ABOUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT BETWEEN NEIL AND TICSA.
THANK YOU