All Comments on 'Quickie Sext'

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Wonderful surprise ending. Very erotic! I love how you told this story.

Wow what a twist.... I read this sitting naked in the sun at my back yard... I didn't need to touch myself to enjoy its full intensity... I'm sure there are many more intense adventures these two characters will explore with explosive results... Ooohh yea..

Thank you for the compliments.....and criticism (prefer constructive) I really enjoy writing and shall continue with even more passion thanks to your compliments. Currently working on a GREAT story with complex characters and, of course, steamy sex. I can see one of you is already preparing for the upcoming "National Nude Day" contest!

MA - one of the better ones in this contest, good luck. Decent story, although the "text" back and forth does get a bit monotonous. Used that before myself, so can't complain too much. I didn't figure the mother/son part, that was a surprise, but for some reason the boss/red dress lady from work being on the phone seemed pretty obvious and didn't come as a surprise. I think if this hadn't been an April Fools Contest entry it might have been a bigger surprise, but always looking for the joke, it just had to be. All in all - liked it.

Very well written, and a great April Fools ending. IMO best in the contest!

I am a lady and this story turned me on alot. I wish I have such a neighbour. This should be in the lesbian category.