All Comments on 'Quiet in the Library'

Please can we have more of this chapter!

Great job!

wish i could add my own chapter ;-)

Please write more storys like this...........WOW!

OMFG! too bad the rating scale only goes to 5 because this story is a 10! the long drawn out teasing and anticipation was supurbly written and I felt the same longing and desire as the main characters as it built to the ultimate crecendo.

Simply amazing...i felt like i was living everything the character was. Now if only I could add my own chapter! Great job, please keep writing stories like this!

One of the hottest stories in the category, for sure. Perfectly captures the appeal of dubcon (dubious consent)/reluctance. Nice lingering burn, just slow enough to get me all wet, hot and bothered.

Oh my word..... that was by far the most sensual piece of literature I've read in a long, long time!! You nailed everything from anticipation and heated intrigue to the blazing intensity that took my breath away... You've managed to capture the paradox at the heart of every female fantasy- tender dominance- in a way that was extremely erotic & sexy, without being lewd/obscene.

Superb work! No doubt you'll gain a trail of women halfway in love with you if you keep submitting stories of the like ;)

-Rena

fantastic, sooooo well done

if only if only....

So detailed, vivid, enticing, and seductive! I felt I was living it out. The best story I've come across on literotica. I hope to read so much more from you!

...language, pictures, vividness... wow! please, keep this great work up

Unforgettable, Superb, fantastic, what more can i say? Such detail and imagination. Simply brilliant. The way you write the story allows the reader to be part of the story and one of the characters. This is definitely the best piece of literature on this site. You deserve to be at the top of the list for best read. I am looking forward to your next story.

I've read several stories on this site that have really impressed me (although few and far between as they are) but none has had quite the effect your story has had.

I am speechless.

Your main character is well crafted and developed: I believe this is a real person. Your writing is impeccable! So much so that it becomes invisible (as truly excellent writing should be), and instead the reader becomes enveloped in the world you create - we are as entangled and at your mercy in the narrative web you weave as Amy is in those cords!

The plot itself is exciting and interesting, with just the right amount of anticipation. Every good girl longs to be bad but needs it to be teased out a bit. I can absolutely relate to notion of binding the good girl to let the nasty one out! :)

Well done! Excellent job! I'm adding you to my favourite authors list and look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Linda_Lee ;)

hot, hot, hot! awesome story, great build up. LOVE it

Sizzingly, meltingly, ravishingly, fabulously, wonderfully, deliciously hot.

I've been reading on this site for the past couple of years. It's not often that I come across something that is so well written. The man-in-black, was every woman's dream, and so sensual. Amy was a lovely character who finally gave in to him. The tension you created between them was just perfect. Please keep writing more. Would love to see more of the man-in-black.

Sabz

I loved reading your story!!

makes me want to go to the library

wow. I came very hard after reading this. I am not the only one who wants to be fucked by a stranger x

Well written. Thank you for the O. ;)

Mmm, delish. I was a substitute librarian for two years, and I just might have stayed in it if this had happened to me. Thank you so much for the wonderfully wicked story. I hope we get to see more of the man in black and Amy....

Stupendous trip into a dreamy land of passion and lust. Irresistible ride to climax of immense satisfaction. Wonderful telling of the torrid librarian fantasy.

Your tale seduces the reader right along with your heroine. Pacing is perfect and the climax is explosive. Best I've read in quite a while.

I have been reading literotica off and on for years, and am constantly dissapointed with the level of writing presented by most 'authors'. This is practically publishable, a series with the man in black could have more than minor success. I've never before felt the burning need to comment on something here but just couldn't help myself this time! Bravo, sir.

Perfectly detailed and mysterious, I devoured this story quite quickly; resulting in wet panties. Very good job!

Awesome story really well written. I'd have probably liked it better without the nipple clips but it was damn hot. Great work.

Just wonderful. The detail and the lead up. Very arousing story. makes a trip to the library a total want. Thank you for making me very wet...

Aside from enjoying her sexual awakening and ultimate surrender to pleasure, the facet I enjoyed the most was the ambiguity of the dominant male to whom she surrendered so willingly. Is he a real man, or is he an incubus? Either is possible. You decide.

Wow. The bit where he helped her shelve the book alone! Please, keep up the good work!

The story awoke arousing feelings that I thought were lost forever. Thank you!

Gave it a 5 and I haven't been rating stories as often as I should.

You made me want to be her. Now I have one favorite author. RAWR

Loved it!! Super hot. Yowza. My kind of reluctance story