by Summerbreeze90
I'm glad this isn't some of the usual over-dominating female sex machine crap that i usually find, and i actually enjoyed myself.
My only quibble is the same as always; the over-abundance of big dick. I'm not implying i'm adverse to the genre, i'm just sad there's too much of it. Even in this story, 9-10 inches would be fine while still being pretty fecking big, and 7, SEVEN inches around?! That's near the same as taking a can of Coca Cola and sticking it up one of your holes! It seems a tad over-doing it, ya know?
Still, overall, great hermaphrodite story, great writing, i would like to see more of your work. Best of luck bro.
Most men do not have massive dicks. It's an overdone trope from people who get turned on by one thing and one thing only. Boring.
While I'm not into drugs, the rest of the story was rather engaging and I liked the level of narrative detail. Not bad for a first story!
Fantastic story, good language and very erotic and hot. I loved the casual drug use through it all, made it sexier. You should definitely write a sequel.
Great, great story! I loved the detail and the descriptiveness! Not onboard with the drug themes, but that wasn't too hard to look past!
In response to those critical of your choices on size: this is fantasy! As far as realism goes, this is a lot more realistic than most of the stories in this genre. If you're going to read a story about a girl with a dick, why would you want it to be small or average? I'm just happy that it wasn't three feet long and that she wasn't some man-hating dominant psychopath!
Good story overall, and I look forward to sequels!
This story deserves more than a Five Star. It should be ay least a ten. Fantastic writing with great wording.
I would love to find a dickgirl and be fucked like Amy was.
This is and will be my favorite.