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Anonymousover 19 years agoQuiet?
Good, simple stuff. It would have been nice to know their relationship.
Lukas
Anonymousover 19 years agoStylish
Mood capture is effective. Not a story requiring character development or dialogue - I would like to see you expand your potential a little perhaps in either of those directions.
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