All Comments on 'Quiet Please Ch. 02'

longer chapters or wait til you have the whole thing and make it 1 long update.

No problem at all with short and hot!

Please keep writing, u r so good at it and u discribe the scene perfectly, like this mad me so wet, I really want u to keep writing this, and great plot, love the storie line

...yet! Lots of promise, lots of background, but the climactic scenes are only dream sequences. Is this going anywhere?