All Comments on 'Quiet Time'

Beautiful story, very well-written! I actually like to know and care about the characters in a story, and this did not disappoint. Lovely! I will look for more of your stories.

Good story, but the timelines need work. Your characters aren't dating, much less sleeping together, until well after September 11th, yet the ages of their children are 9 and 5? This stuck out like a sore thumb and shot the believability.