All Comments on 'Quinn'

An absolutely gorgeous story! Keep up the good work.

Thank you!

I would have broken asshole’s nose then made him set up an irrevocable trust,

Amazing. Perfect even with the errors. You should publish this on a paid site, you'd make money if marketed right, it was that good.

Very well told story. 5*

Great story!!!

wonderful, please follow up.

Great story. Thank you.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Thanks! Great story with good characters (except the brother).

well done loved it

Can't truly express how much I love this story. Tons of hidden angst that he worked to resolve and to confront, which blossomed into an accepted and very loving relationship. Daniel was a world-class a-hole and no doubts about it. Rob fulfilled her knight in shining armor and it was so cute how you built it up--and turned it a little on its head--by having her pregnant and him accepting her baby from such novel interactions and shared experiences. 5

Sweet and honest and it had the feeling of being realistic while still holding enough fantasy to be a great story.

A hall of fame story to me. Loved it from start to finish and wish it didn't have to finish. I really think Rhylee needs a little brother real soon.

5 stars and that is coming from someone who doesn't like incest stories. However, this one is very tasteful compared to some others.

There are some grammatical issues, but not so glaring as to detract or confuse the reader.

Loved it, an emotional roller-coaster, good story from start to finish.

Thanks for sharing with us.

A damned good love story

He should have broken his brother's leg for hurting Bruce's leg.

A really beautiful storey. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Amazing story, I agree he should have done something for Bruce.

Wonderful story, i love damsels in distress stories. Five stars. Sorry but his P. O. S. Big brother got off easy too easy. Bastard shoulder pay heavily.

One of my favorite reads on Literotica

Beautiful Story!

Loved the story

good story. hope all 3 of them have a happy life.

Great story. Liked how you ended it. Maybe a part 2? Sure, there is more story to tell?

Sweet!

Very nice love story. I enjoy your writing. In Pt2 Danny drives his Ferrari under a semi while texting & Quinn inherits everything

This is a love story. The kinship aside. They are close in age. The writer captured two souls destined to be together. The child actually tied them more together.

Very well written.

I liked the story. Not too long nor too short. Well told. My only critique is you need a proofreader. There are several instances where you add or omit letters in words. It is easy to figure out what you mean, but it could be so much better.

@Liferal …. karmic justice, i agree