by SeattleRain
Clever interweaving of sexual and religious motifs - powerful stuff, very like (sorry if this sounds pretentious) film maker Luis Bunuel. The whole thing is paced very well - like the slow build-up of the relationship. Horny as hell without the usual cliched blow-by-blow and so unarousing description of climax after climax. It had a beginning, middle and end - and I hope there will be more. Thanks.
I admire your expressive style. I find myself thinking if I could only impress you as strongly as this Mary. I'm jumping from the story character to the author personally. In all the stories I've read this is the first time this has happened.
I look forward to reading more.
Thank you.
jesus H. Are you me? I've lived it, every word, but I don't think I could write it as well.
amazingly well done.