All Comments on 'R & R Ch. 04'

did she lose her v card 2x or what cause she said the same thing twice about humans being obsessed with sex

go on u r doing exellent

I'm pretty sure the most common theme of all the sentence on Lit is, “Sorry this took so long, but I'll try to do better from now on.”

Anyway, yes, this was the second time she said that she now understood why humans/people are obsessed with sex. However, the first one was written months before this one, so I'm not surprised the author forgot about it!

The only thing I don't like about this story is the collection of annoying malapropisms, which happens all the time when a writer just repeats what he thinks he hears without thinking about it.

Good idea would be making Ryan Rachel's trial, since he's still hanging on to the memory of his parents getting shot

Please write more this is amazing