All Comments on 'R.I.P'

I enjoyed the humor your characters brought to the story it made everything seem more realistic. Good luck in the contest!

Very well written and loved the humor. You know where it's going but it doesn't let you down and even gives you a little extra, and the specifics about the paranormal investigators and their equipment is well done.

A very well written story that was hot and sexy. Good luck in the contest.

Great story Les! I'll have to go back and read the other one you mentioned. Good luck!

An enjoyable read. Ghostly and sexy, Halloween doesn't get any better than that. Good luck in the contest.

With respect

DG Hear

Loved it, one of the best!