All Comments on 'Racers Ch. 09'

YEAH!!!!! I jumped for joy when I saw this chapter. I love this story and was wanting for it to be continued. Thank you for writing more and please keep adding more chapters. I just love the players. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please hurry.

Great! Finally! Please continue. Love this story and like your writing style a lot. Hope relationship between Ryker & Cheandra improves.

I loved it. Glad to see another chapter. As much as I'm hooked on your Brad & Janey & Ren series, it was wonderful to see this chapter. I love the interaction between Ryker and Cheandra. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks.

Sorry, but if anything were to destroy a team, it would be what Ryker did to Cheandra. If she really were the strong personality you portrayed her as, she would make it clear that forcing her killed her loyalty and made her *hate* him and those that assisted in the rape instead of defending her. Instead, your story now seems to indicate that being an asshole instead of a gentleman is worthwhile and rape is OK as long as it is "for the team". But NOTHING can justify rape.

What? Its a good storyline, please complete the series.

I enjoyed the story until the last 2 chapters and then the story was ruined for me. Hope there will be no new chapters to this story as I consider it dead and buried.

i love the story so far, hope you write more chapters soon :)

Great Story can't wait for more!

when are you going to finsh the story. Don't leave it unfinshed.

Please write more of this excellent story on Cheandra and Ryker!!! I would really like to see how the story turns out!! Thank you for being a very gifted writer!!!! :)

And it left me wanting more:)

*sigh*.. the writing is ok.. the background is quite interesting.. the last 2 chapters ruined this story..

characters are un-interesting cardboard cut-outs.. the dominate male who does whatever he wants and has no consequences..

a supposedly spirited woman who really just wants to be raped every day.. she's just a slut really :(

the rest of the characters I know nothing about after 9 chapters

Sorry, this story is a poor poor shadow of your other stories.

P.S. this shouldn't be in Sci-Fi though it should in non-reluctance/control.

Verbatim. Word for word.

Ryker is the worst kind of Boss for a team. A bully boss.

Hopefully one of the rival gangs will kill him.

And, definitely should be in Noncon/Reluct.

please write more!

Please, pretty please, finish this one !!

Have read all your stories and dont know why i havent read this sooner oooh please write more this is gold you cant leave us in the lerch like this pppppppplease more!!! Xxxxxx

i get that, and people who fantasizes about rape will absolutley love this story, since it romantizes rape.

The woman tends to the household, she has sex with different men to get ahead and the men use her as they please. And now she´ll be chained barefoot to the stobe with a brat klinging to her skirt. Poor girl.

This story had potential up until the last two chapters. Lets be diplomatic and say they were less than good.

Rape is an awful thing. It destroys lives and causes deep trauma and scarring. Luckily, your female characters are brainless lolitas and trauma seem to have no effect on them.

The story was interesting up until the rape.

.... next part ? ... please make her leave this bastard ....

Ryker is a bastard and Cheandra is curmudgeonly - they were made for each other.

Incidentally:

Your = belonging to you.

You're = you are.

Don't mix them up!