by demon160
Heu, c'est quoi ces états d'âmes et se sauve t elle pendant 2 jours sans explication. Il aurait dû la jeter à ce moment. Encore une mauviette.
Enjoyed story snd will hope secpnd chapter comrs soon
In this day and age? Pregnant?
Kids would have fathers surname as they were married. No mention of battles in the divorce, he just pissed off with new dollie. Very few men take on her name unless she is from rich family.
Nice story , bittersweet though. In regards to the girls having the same surname as mum ; It's quite possible. In Australia since the millennium change quite a few grooms have taken on the surname of the bride at weddings it's not the norm but it does happen.
When Matt mentioned giving the girls nicknames I was thinking that Williams was the maiden name and most likely the girls would have had the father's last name. If during the divorce and custody battle Mel decided to return to her maiden name and legally change her daughters' names it would make sense though. You should probably mention it at some point. Otherwise great story!
Loved it from the start and the pacing and story telling only got better with each paragraph. Now I have much to look forward to but patiently just like the MCs.
5!
Wow I loved this story of how they finally figured out that they were in love with each other. Please continue this series.
5 Stars