All Comments on 'Radiance Ch. 07'

You really need an editor, but that a side, entertaining,seven chapters , should be seventy stars, for creativity, and effort. More please.

North-Pacific

Great story. Really love the premise you have going on here. I myself returned the egg i found at the Museum of Witchcraft. Editing smedditing. You have been getting better every chapter and isn't bad enough to throw off my continuity. Keep up the good work.