by GhostNobody
And a waste of a chapter. I'm glad I scanned it and didn't bother reading it. Dude, when you are writing sex scenes that take up 2 pages with made up creatures nobody is getting turned on. These sex scenes are all similar and like many of the things in this story, overly repetitive and redundant.
At this point, stick mainly to the plot of the story and don't bother going into long details of the sex between all the members of the group. It's boring and a waste of time.
The story line is good. Please stick to the story, the sex scenes just take up space. This chapter I just skipped waiting for story to pick up again.