All Comments on 'Rain'

by simonpetersimon

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wow! Love it.

MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFerabout 1 year ago

Oh Si, this was a sad one, it made me feel like raining. In all honesty though, Billy sounded like a pretty selfish lover, taking a lot more than he gave. But the rain will stop, the sun will shine again and hopefully there'll be better luck next time around.

PG564EPG564Eabout 1 year ago

Sensuous gay love and sex. Beautifully written, both with lust and emotional tenderness. Billy's cock took Dan places he had never been before. He belonged to this forceful hunk whose cock owned Dan right from the start.

Dan loved serving him, pleasing Billy no matter how much pain his throat and asshole endured the rough, forced treatment. It made Dan proud he could take that oral and anal pounding, he was in love for that mastering cock that Billy gave him. It was touching, almost biographical there was so much meaning and loss in your story.

It was terrific, and I liked it very much. This is powerful, and I will read it again and again. I've never been fucked so intensely. I have been mouth fucked and loved it, but the cocks did not invade my whole throat. I wish they could have, but my throat was just too small. I could not will it to expand for a huge hard penis.

Really glad you wrote this story. Wonder if I will meet my Billy? You made me want to. Awesome erotic story.

simonpetersimonsimonpetersimonabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks so much for liking this story. May I add a remark: while writing the story I had to stop a couple of times to wipe tears off my stupid face. Autobiographical? Maybe a little, but definitely wishful thinking. I have never really met a Billy, but I did experience one coming pretty close. I make a good Dan hehehehe

Kisses

Simon

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