All Comments on 'Rain and Sunny'

Needs serious editing, especially, for the punctuation. Had to stop reading by page two, since it was so distracting.

Great story overall, despite the negative comment below, I still believed it to be the best romance story I read online, and the funny thing is I am currently writing a story where rain is the protagonist, but the story is not about romance. Again, don't let the haters stultify your passions. Lastly, keep up the good work!

If this story hadn't superpower topic,may one of the best story I read.