by glynndah
Some writers make love sound dirty, you make sex sound just as wonderful as it realy is. Great work, imagination without pretence, beautiful moment beautifly captured.
I'm been waiting for your story. The wait was well worth it too.
Lovely take, terribly romantic and just great. You write a real good story. Are the first copies of prints really called 'virgins'? (Showing my ignorance). Loved it. Good luck, Elle
in an out of place, makeshift, rainforest. A sweet story that has potential to become a novel. Well done, girl.
Awesome story,,this brought back a very special memory,, very similer.. on all counts...
Thanks...
I don't see this level of character interactions, very well done!
and a tender 'First Time' tale. Great story, lil' witch. It reads all the better for being posted--if that's possible!
Beautiful imagery and a tender tale with it. Nicely done, definitely worth the wait.
What a delight this story was to read. I found it warm and totally believable. Your characters were well written, and I felt like I knew them.
Thanks for reminding me of someone in my past...
I remember Jed Smock in the 70's at Eastern Illinois University. I used to bait him with glee until I decided that ignoring him was the one thing he couldn't take. Making out more or less in front of him would've been even better.
I really enjoyed "Rainforest Encounter" - it captures the innocence and excitement of first live. Well done!
I wish my first time would have been so sweet! Truly lovely :)
Selena
The opening felt a bit slow, but the characters are well-done and appealing. Good luck
These two youngsters are so young and sweet. The sex is so gentle and tentative that I'm surprised they get it on. It is after all a first (and blind) date. The story seems to be less college than high school. But it has a lovely perfume to it, doesn't it?
I love first time stories, and this one is a good one. Sorry that I've missed it over the past few years.
You've painted a wonderful scene in the tent with the guy and the girl. Romantic--yes; sexy--yes; first time--yes; satisfying--yes, yes, yes.
I can see them ten years later laughing together as they recall the rainstorm that brought them together. Thanks for posting--it's a great story.