All Comments on 'Rainforest Encounter'

by glynndah

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Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 9 years ago
Thanks for the rainstorm

I love first time stories, and this one is a good one. Sorry that I've missed it over the past few years.

You've painted a wonderful scene in the tent with the guy and the girl. Romantic--yes; sexy--yes; first time--yes; satisfying--yes, yes, yes.

I can see them ten years later laughing together as they recall the rainstorm that brought them together. Thanks for posting--it's a great story.

taxpapabobtaxpapabobover 14 years ago
Sweet Young Jungle Cats!

These two youngsters are so young and sweet. The sex is so gentle and tentative that I'm surprised they get it on. It is after all a first (and blind) date. The story seems to be less college than high school. But it has a lovely perfume to it, doesn't it?

Joe WordsworthJoe Wordsworthover 16 years ago
I like this one a lot.

Very romantic and sweet. I dug it.

RogueLurkerRogueLurkerabout 17 years ago
wonderful

a lovely and romantic tale. well done, glynndah.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinabout 17 years ago
Two well-drawn characters

The opening felt a bit slow, but the characters are well-done and appealing. Good luck

Skip1934aSkip1934aabout 17 years ago
Warm and Sweet

A touching story well told. Great work, girl.

_Lynn__Lynn_about 17 years ago
Tender and sweet....

Truly enjoyed it. Good luck!!

Selena_KittSelena_Kittabout 17 years ago
I wish...

I wish my first time would have been so sweet! Truly lovely :)

Selena

RoughRider007RoughRider007about 17 years ago
A very cute story!

I really enjoyed "Rainforest Encounter" - it captures the innocence and excitement of first live. Well done!

damppantiesdamppantiesabout 17 years ago
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Such a sweet story. :) Good luck in the contest.

HikergirlHikergirlabout 17 years ago
Mmmm...what a feel good story.

Very sweet, thank you!

DarkniciadDarkniciadabout 17 years ago
Hot n' sweet

Excellent, believable tale with plenty of heat. Well done.

Spence99Spence99about 17 years ago
great story!

I loved it! So hot! So sensual! Witchy! You rule!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
And sadly, Jed Smock is not a fictional character

I remember Jed Smock in the 70's at Eastern Illinois University. I used to bait him with glee until I decided that ignoring him was the one thing he couldn't take. Making out more or less in front of him would've been even better.

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonabout 17 years ago
Well Done!

What a delight this story was to read. I found it warm and totally believable. Your characters were well written, and I felt like I knew them.

Thanks for reminding me of someone in my past...

starrkersstarrkersabout 17 years ago
I want that tent

Beautiful imagery and a tender tale with it. Nicely done, definitely worth the wait.

TE999TE999about 17 years ago
Rainy day romance...

and a tender 'First Time' tale. Great story, lil' witch. It reads all the better for being posted--if that's possible!

Kain__ThornnKain__Thornnabout 17 years ago
Good interactions!

I don't see this level of character interactions, very well done!

huskiehuskieabout 17 years ago
Good story

Very well thought out. Lot's of talent this writer has.

anvil1anvil1about 17 years ago
Fond Memories,, Thanks!!

Awesome story,,this brought back a very special memory,, very similer.. on all counts...

Thanks...

Skip1934aSkip1934aabout 17 years ago
Surrendered virginity

in an out of place, makeshift, rainforest. A sweet story that has potential to become a novel. Well done, girl.

elfin_odalisqueelfin_odalisqueabout 17 years ago
Great stuff!

Lovely take, terribly romantic and just great. You write a real good story. Are the first copies of prints really called 'virgins'? (Showing my ignorance). Loved it. Good luck, Elle

Jenny_JacksonJenny_Jacksonabout 17 years ago
About time...

I'm been waiting for your story. The wait was well worth it too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Fine piece or work

Some writers make love sound dirty, you make sex sound just as wonderful as it realy is. Great work, imagination without pretence, beautiful moment beautifly captured.

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