All Comments on 'Rainy Morning'

Not one of your better stories. So, she "feels" that sex as payment for someone that she feels indebted to is OK. If this is the general attitude in Scandinavian countries, think I'll pass. Since Albert is a player, the husband didn't request/demand blood tests for STD's?

Forgiving a loved one for making a mistake doesn't make you a wimp. Second chances are usually deserved because we all do stupid stuff and say mean things sometimes. And if you included our private thoughts, we would all be labeled as evil monsters every now and then. But forgiveness doesn't mean you have to take her back. I am on the fence here but I am ok with the outcome, I guess. I am not sure why the police took his cell phone, but I am thinking the officer meant cell phone number. Ok...I'm done.

RAAC's that are so very poorly substantiated are simply not my thing... This one has so many plot holes that i feel ilike I am standing on the Grand Canyon overlook looking down at the mile drop off... In short you have a "wife" that chooses to slut herself voluntarily to her boss... betraying her husband in every single way possible AND is utterly unrepentant of her betrayal other than she got caught in her little mistake..., and you actually expect your readers to fall in line with this bull manure and properly suspend disbelief... Not a chance Skippy...this one is probably one of the worst Epic Fails I have come across....

1 star

Poor wimp, she fucked the boss because she wanted to and got an opportunity to do so, but she got caught, then talked her way out of it. She’ll be a model wife… for a while,

The story should have included a DNA test to confirm the father

It’s the bad grammar and bad English that spoils this story.

Your stories are all the same. You have wife of having an affair while wimpy husband sits in the corner whining like a baby. You make him weak and worthless. This ensures your wife character can get away with her bad behavior and suffer no consequences. Instead you have hubby blame himself for everything that went wrong. Stupid just stupid

You need a good editor to tidy up your grammar and sentence construction. Don’t like the ending. Cuckold too forgiving of wife.

She fucked for a better job position. Ergo, she is a prostitute. Do you want a prostitute raising your children? Very weak premise.

Cuck cuck cuck cuck

WTF this guy is a true cuckold waiting to happen. First thing believing and thing that she had to say, such as it was only one night, it could have been months. And her Explanation For the affair made it sound like love boy did nothing wrong, oh ya for sure. But the very most Laughable thing was her telling him she was Pregnant. So even if he wanted to take her back and even if he though the baby was his Which I doubt it was. He should have made her go though the Demoralizing act of still Getting an Abortion, as what was in her belly was Contaminated by Albert fucking her. Then right after the abortion made her Pregnant with your Sperm for sure that it's your, this would Humiliate her that you still didn't trust her..

Well will you look at that it’s not just the USA that produces gullible men, they seem to be a world wide phenomenon.

Pathetic

must be something in the water in scandavian countries makes men bunch of pussies. wife cheats ship her ass out the door. Staying cause of kids is worse for the kids then divorce. the land of vikings become the land of manladies..

Very poorly written, I had great difficulty in following it, -I think you need a new translator to convert it to English, so it is not quite so disjointed, and reads a little more smoothly!

The storyline is just NOT credible, -you can't portray a heartless whore, who deliberately cheats, lies, and mercilessly torments her loving old man, ignores her own son, disavows and disrespects her marriage, her husband and son, then continue to attribute more-and-more sins to her, only to suddenly do an about-turn, a complete 180, & transform the She-Devil into a poor little hard-done-by innocent half-wit!

It cannot be done, it is self-defeating, pulling the mat out from under your OWN feet! It does NOT add up!

Overall a good read 4*

Not bad....but DNA test!

A god read for sure. But when I wonder what I would do if my wife went crazy and slept (or even smiled too much) another man. Pretend the husband didn't know about the several days cheating. Whet then? The affair would have lingered and created no=going=back scenario and certain divorce. What's the difference in a free meal and a night of conventual (she said it was good) sex vs. a coupled of months of sneaking around waiting for the fire to go out (which it was destined to happen). Me? I would have kicked her to the curb. Although the baby in the oven was a "wild card". All humans sin so a a trail period with forgiveness would be expected.

Well, I liked this story. Create, interesting, well-written.

Ed

You got to be F ing kidding me. She has an affair and you take the whore slut back. How F ing dumb can u BE?????????????? You no thesaying once a cheater ALWAYS a cheater.

As a woman I refuse to believe men write these cuck stories. Yuck!!

CUCK. WIMP. SISSY.

ONCE a CHHEATER allways a CHEATER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

After reading this story of a wimpy fucking loser cuck, the Frog is dead to me.

1 star.

The reason why this story is garbage is that the first page begins in a typical WF fashion - fast, to the point, and a good plot. The problem is what follows, no so much reconcilliation but moronic blabber and empty relentless rationalization for the reconcilliation. That turn an action story into an absurd testimony, even with a hint of psychobabble which I hoped never to read from Winterfrog.

Whatever is the motivation for this drivel, I think this is one of the worst if not the worst Winterfrog's stories.

We, Im not sure what this was more like a steaming pile of shit or a stupid steaming pile of shit.

After this I truly hope you find the cock you wish for yourself in the future.

Cuck story. Explenations are lame and unbelivable.

Another dumb cuckold story.

1 star for the reconciliation, never keep a cheating spouse always divorce and only communicate about any shared children and nothing else.

You have written much better.

The idea she would remain in the job that led to her cheating is ridiculous. Watching her dress for work each morning would be like observing her prepare for her lover. She should start over at a new company and avoid handing out sexual favors to express her gratitude for any raises or promotions.

All you dumb asses blaming everything that is bad in your pathetic lives on black people.

When the baby came out black.

Well I understand the opinions but she only cheated once and was prepared to buckle down so she wasn't hooked on cheating and would get past it quickly and move on.

Sometimes if you have a good woman forgiveness is the best way forward as long as you are clear she ever steps out of line for any reason you won't even give her the chance to explain before she is gone.

Fear of consequence can be a good motivator. The only thing with this woman was her arrogance in the beginning to try to bluff her husband so he would still have to keep a careful eye out for a while.

Believe me I am as forceful as most men would be to a cheater but sometimes forgiveness can be the best option especially as a one time thing on a serial cheater she would not even get the chance.

I stopped reading when the MC started to go back to his slut wife. No way should one go back to a cheater. Even if the slut is pregnant.

She's having ETs baby

Maybe it’s ok in his country to be a wimp. Real man would move on

How is the police took his cellphone and a few minutes later his wife called him?

Hell fucking no!

Europeans do not have the same mindset as American anons, this coming from an American!

Nope.

He knew she was cheating on him...she admitted to him...but this guy is a wimp... everything she said to him is the reason why...he should have given her the divorce papers...even if he didn't go throung it...the divorce papers was the best way to make his wife pay for what she did...he should have made her crawl back on her hands an knees for fucking her boss....if he had done that...I would have had some respect for him.....but he didn't..........

The story is dull. Wife has a supposedly one night fling and the husband says "well then everything is OK".

She did what Albert wanted instead of her husband. He never asked that would she continue with Albert if he and she hadn't been found out. My guess is yes if she was truthful. BTB! Winterfrog has a habit of wimping out male characters.

I’m not sure what you got out of writing a story where the husband doesn’t take any shit then, make him a wimpy do anything she says guy. You write him strong at the beginning then a wimp at end with no warning. (Make up your mind) no vote or Zero stars.

...the idea of needing to thank him sticks in my gut. She admitted to an attraction, but I think it was far more that than the other. Thanking him with sex is FAR outside the bounds of what was called for. I think she is still being dishonest, or she has psychological issues that are unresolved.

I enjoy your stories. In this case reconciliation makes sense. She made a one time mistake.

Is he sure it's his child? Not much recrimination for the cheating.

The husband really tried. I won't ever forgive my wife if she ever strays. QED.

He is a willing whimp. Why forgive a wife who is a willing slut. I’m sure she will have other affairs.

To the author you are getting too soft on cheating wives, you should try to change your stories in that aspect. Sorry no stars at all in this sorry story, I wasted my time reading it.

How did Albert come to have an apartment when he was living in a house with his wife?.

No reconciliation

She screwed him twice plus blowjob because she wanted to thank him even though she earned it

No sense ditch the bitch

She treated the family (husband and son) bad and ignored them a lot. Catherine never gave Eric a second thought, she was only concerned about herself and what she wanted, i/e sex with Albert! Catherine cheated and would most likely would continue to cheat with Albert if Eric had not discovered her cheating. She wanted Eric to apologize to Albert for calling a spade a spade! Eric should have first went out and spent the night in the same hotel with another woman, does not matter if they had sex or not, then got someone the tell Catherine they saw Eric and another woman coming out of said hotel. If Carherine blew up, Eric could look her in the eye and ask her, how does it feel to find out the one you love had sex with another person. Then Eric should have insisted on Catherine taking a lie detector test to determine if she was telling him the truth about Albert and anyone else Catherine might have cheated with during their marriage. Next, Eric should insist on a DNA test for both kids. Last, Eric should insist Catherine sign a post nuptial agreement, stating if one of them cheated the other would walk away with everything leaving the cheater with only their colthes. But this is just my opinion.

Frog is going too soft on these cheating wives. Don't care for this Frog.

Sometimes, a person needs a hard wake up call before they get their head on straight. She was amazingly stupid to repay the hound with sex, but I suspect it had more to do with her own desires. Interesting story.

You have a bitchy wife character and all the ingredients for a complete disrespect and cheating ... and then you turn that character around so that you could have a reasoning for "happy ending". This is not the best you can do, I like your writing but this story is not good.

hockey players are supposed to be tough

you give us all a bad name

but then again besides forsberg all the scandenavians are all scared shitless and when the going gets rough they go and hide

lmfao

the kid is probably her lovers

what a wuss

grow a pair of balls

i`m thinking of his bowling pals and how they are laughing at him and the friend that told him of the affair thinking it was a waste of time to tell him ,,, next time all his friends will keep their mouths shut because he `ll take her back again anyway

maybe all his friends could give her a nice gang bang

Okay, here goes. Normally I don't like to rag on an author who needs an editor, but dude YOU NEED AN EDITOR! Not in a small oops I missed a word here and there, but in a way that doesn't make you sound like you have one tooth and walk barefoot in the woods kind of way.

I also don't like ragging on an author's choices for stories because for the most part every story is a story worth being told .... If you don't like it read something else, is my philosophy. BUT since if gone this far... She walked out without trying to give her side, she walked out without pleading for a relationship with her son, she walked out after giving her husband an ultimatum meant to make her lover look better in everyone's eyes, and she was upset when she thought her husband had done the damage to her lover ... She only crawled back once she found out everyone knew, and her lover had his nuts crushed! She only wants a safety net, a pretend relationship... She's a heartless skank! He's an idiot.

...and clear check on tests for STDs.

I like protagonist's comments near the end of the story, the justification for reconciling rather than yielding to others' perceptions of him as a wimp. A wimp would divorce rather than be embarrassed to be viewed as weak; the strong, moral, thinking adult made his own decision based on his knowledge of what he knew and wanted from his wife and their marriage (no spoiled bitch, equal involvement, both parents living for the well-being of their children, the family).

She loves him and her family, of course it’s only after she’s been busted. Get a DNA test.

You are a cuckold plain and simple!

your stories are all the same wife fucks around, whatever the reason and hubby cant stand to be without her so he takes her back.......please get a real job so you dont have the time to write such crap

and generally run a good story line, but please get either a Brit, An Aussie or a Yank to help your editing. If your stories flowed a little smoother, they would all gain at least a star.

marriages are forever in turmoil, for the same reasons. TK U MLJ LV NV

At least he made some kind of stand against the boyfriend but it took some unknown person to lay down the whipass on the guy. The cheating wife gets the pass to wait until she finds some other guy to give her some help in another situation and decide that fucking him is the best way to say "thank you". I mean, giving him some sort of gift would have started a rumor mill but fucking him, well that's ok. Made no sense.

looking for rainy day people. TK U MLJ LV NV

Most companies have a clause that prohibits supervision from intimate contact with employee's whether it is voluntary or not. It was a good read and a good ending.

good writing but the story....

She cheated. She did it on purpose.

She didnt care of any possible effects on her family.

She obeyed her lover against her husband.

How can it be written he forgave her?

Divorce her, period!! If she can be conned that easy than she will do it again you wimp. No man card for him.

Your story covered nearly all points but, missed a few. Was she using any birth control. Was her FB was using condoms, those types of questions were not asked or answered. Why she didn't talk to HR about a new job opening at her company but, she told her husband the butt head FB gave her info for the job. There seemed to be some confusion and mixing of the order of facts that would make this story flow better. The company didn't get involved it seems until he was attacked. The same people with the information about the job investigated his attack. I really could find no reason to allow her to come back with the reasons she gave I'm sorry. She was pregnant and No DNA test was ask for or offered. If the ending where she comes back is what you want more information and better organization of the storyline is needed for me. This story is still a good idea.

another one of your crap stories where she is really sorry and wants to make it right just let her come home and prove it....what a CUCK

I have to agree with anonymous on this one. I also feel that you could have cleared up a few things concerning her pregnancy and the results of the DNA test .

In 95% of the stories where the wife cheated,I was steadfast in believing she should be kicked to the curb. This was one of the few where I can see where staying together might be the better choice. He said it himself,"I asked myself if it really could be a clever decision that Catherine's few hours of drunken stupidity would be allowed to be a valid reason for destroying many years of happiness for all four of us in our family?"

In this case,she finally realized her complete love for her husband,and needed to try harder to be a better wife. As it turned out,in this case at least,"All's well that ends well".

wait, she was not on birth control.

She said she didnt already know she was pregnant when she had her affair.

She did not care if her lover got her pregnant?

Hmmmm

1 star and that's a stretch.

First, we learn she thinks he is out of town on Friday night. Second, we learn she refused to go to the in-town Friday night celebration. Other than that, another VG WF story.

After reading several of Winterfrog's stories, I think that Scandinavian women can do anything that they want and if caught, just say they love their husband and they are sorry, etc. etc. and the husband will drop everything, disrespect, cheating, etc. and take them back with open arms. This is just real hard for me to believe.

Her so-called honest confession was worse than if she would have lied. After a confession like that he should have ran from her as fast as possible and moved on with his life. What is she going to do the next time a colleague "helps" her? Very hard to believe a real man would behave this way. I know this is only my opinion but everything I read is filtered through my beliefs. I don't attack the author but only this fictional story and fictional people.

I think there is a logic flaw in this tale as there are in many of this genre. "She was a lazy spoiled bitch" that cheated on not just her husband but her child as well. Yet, she was a good mother to Martin? WTF, that is a contradiction! She was a lousy wife by both their statements, she was a lousy mother by definition. So, because she is pregnant he is stuck with her? Oh but she is going to change!? Right, bullshit. Let's face it this guy is fucked in any civilized western country the courts will hand him his ass. He may as well stay married and avoid the total devastation divorce will deal him. Just don't pretend that she loves him or the kid! Love is the act of caring! Familial and spousal love is the act of caring for others to the point of denying yourself certain pleasures - like adulterous sex! Fucking stupid lack of logic. Sorry but I expect more from Winterfrog who is one of the few writers with balls on this site.

I try not to live by double standards. if the shoe was on the other foot, would it be the same answer? I think the result would be the same.

Who is the father of that Baby?! Here we have another story where the wife & husband spew their verbal diarrhea of Bull Shit. The wife taken a page out of the Jimmy Swaggart book on forgiveness. The husband calling her a whore & slut and she took it as if he called her honey or lover. BULL SHIT!

I can't believe some of the conclusions some people came up with esp fatherhood of the new child. Perhaps I missed a chapter? If you're going to comment on a story, at least make it based of facts in said story. Otherwise write one yourself

Albert must have been a brain donor, thinking a hockey player just barely below professional level was a wimp.

The reconciliation was iffy in this, but as a one time event maybe.

I am all ways for forgiveness if possible.

In this story I am conflicted.

Alcohol was not the issue as she said she would have done it either way.

To cheat on her husband is one thing, but she also had a child that could be damaged, to me this made her affair far worse.

I guess am happy enough how it turned out, but still, she did this deliberately.

Made a date with another man, then went to a hotel intentionally.

but is an umbrella is handy they might not get too drenched. TK U MLJ LV NV

"Cant live with em ----Cant live without them" . Personally i would have liked it to have been Martin who was responsible for Albert's ass kicking, preferably with a Hockeystick. With a cast iron alibi of course.LOL

All in all short and sweet,I didn't even scan it, not a bad read for a second language writer. Well done Mr Frog.

I'm a lucky man I have a good one------ mr and mrs average for 40 years

WFrog is STILL a guy who jumps right into a problem with both feet! No subtlety to speak of. Except, this time, to refrain from accusing Sweetie in public!

However, he is now willing to give Sweetie another chance! Unusual for a character written by the Scandinavian Frog!

4*

Out the door with the cheating whore bitch with her little bastard baby. Once a cheater always a cheater.

This story was well written but it had serious issues unresolved. What were the DNA results for example? One indiscretion should be evaluated on its merits and it should be done when the anger and pain has somewhat subsided. It is always better to reconcile if possible.

he forgave her but will not forget what she did. guess his answer to the question, "is life better with or without her", is with her. thanks

no resolution. no consequences.

too many variables. waste of time!

The wife got away with cheating. This time. Fucking cunt.

the ultimate cuckold strikes again.

and a nice ending. Thanks.

This one just begs for a sequel. Suggestion: start it 7 to 10 years later when the kids are no longer needing Mommy as much. She gets another promotion and her home life is "boring." A younger salesman at work starts paying too much attention to her. She thinks to herself, "It'll spice up our sex life at home if I have a shag night or two with "Stud-boy." He'll never know, but if he does, I'll beg and he'll forgive me again--just like last time! It's a win-win for me!"

But the "frog" doesn't play that way! Looking forward to some classic mind games with the cheating bitch and the "kick the bitch to the curb" scene.

Enjoying your stories!

K

Some just plain stupid - I do believe most of us welcome an author who writes in english as a second language and lives in a non-english speaking country.

It allows us to see how these stories play and evolve in a place with dissimilar customs, rules, social expectations -

Thanks very much for your work and sharing it -

This wife seemed an easy mark who needs to have changed or it will likely happen again

no wife gives her self to another man that love her husband unless she is worthless trash.

divorce her let her fuck other since she cant keep her legs shut.

Try putting some sex in your stories, they are really boring.

But thank for the many laughs through out this story. What a total shmuck !! LOL. your English gramar is getting better

Just as the narrator gets shut of this self-indulgent woman , she has 2nd unplanned pregnancy & he's trapped again. The epilogue has her having learned a lesson but she launched into the affair so casually , it doesn't auger well long-term. Yet for the sake of the baby , it's understandable why she gets another chance.

Good story,though queasy feeling at end. Frankly, that's often symptomatic of actual life . Poor narrator. His trophy wife has high millstone round the neck potential.

Maybe you should re-read and edit your stories before you post them.