All Comments on 'Rainy Night'

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CorjixCorjixover 5 years ago
Simply Hot

Simple story. Well told. Hot! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Lovely story and excellent writing!

Really put me in the moment. Enjoyed it very much.

One thing though, it seemed that the opening gambit should have been a bit more gradual, beyond the driver telling him how good looking he was. Also, the cyclist is soaked and his exertion would have steamed the windows immediately. The blow job would have been wet and messy for the driver, who might have naturally offered a shower food and his bed. I know I would have!

Great initial effort and I hope to see more work from you. Glad I always have a rack on the back of my car. Might have to take a drive the next rainy night...

PissdrinkerPissdrinkerover 5 years ago
Spot on.

Well done and thank you, you spunk swallowing novice. I hope whatever follows (and swallows) is safe and horny.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More!

Please right another chapter to this story!!!

Csucker64Csucker64over 5 years ago
Excellent story

Short and to the point - very well written , more please

MarkbikeMarkbikeover 5 years ago
Good read

A real feel-good story and hot. Would love to read how things develop.

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