by Human_Primacy
very weird, makes me wonder what else goes through your head
very creepy
sex with dead humans is illegal
Wrong category.
This is not a Non-Human.
It's disgusting.
Flat out no stars.
Wrong category.
This is about the weirdest thing I've read in Lit. and totally grosses me out.
Where I understand the Frankenstein concept; sex with the dead is just beyond words. Vomited a little in my mouth when i read that.
This is the first and last chapter I have read. Please put future chapters back in the Sci-Fi category. Not sure there is a proper category for this though. Makes me ill.
Not sure why you would start reading a story at chapter 7, or how one gets disturbed by the sex in a chapter with hardly any sexual content. But thanks for reading, all the same.
The category thing was an error on my part, and a change has been submitted.
Ignore the chastising comments here. You're doing pretty good work. Undead, zombie, frankenstein-ish type characters in erotica is nothing new. It just requires a 'certain' taste to truly be appreciated. Your description of Eve is well-thought out and not too overboard. If she had rotting tumors or gross puss seeping out of her head, then yeah, it'd be gross. Keep going, I wanna see how this plays out.
Keep up the good work! I genuinely enjoy the characters and general atmosphere of your story! Would very much be interested in a possible prequel/spin off involving more misadventures of Victoria Stein and her crew! Can't wait for ch 8!
Love this story, especially how her creation is dominating her, and the humor elements. Saw all the negatives so very long time reader first time comment leaver. Keep it up
This is all pretty good, and I am enjoying the story and characters so much that I would honestly still read this even without the lewd parts. Really hope you can get back to this one day since this may be and if my favorite stories on this site.