All Comments on 'Raising the Dead... Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
This isn't Non Human, it's a dead human brought back

very weird, makes me wonder what else goes through your head

very creepy

sex with dead humans is illegal

Masterskitten26Masterskitten26almost 6 years ago
Necrophilia much?

Wrong category.

This is not a Non-Human.

It's disgusting.

Flat out no stars.

Masterskitten26Masterskitten26almost 6 years ago
Necrophilia much?

Wrong category.

This is about the weirdest thing I've read in Lit. and totally grosses me out.

Where I understand the Frankenstein concept; sex with the dead is just beyond words. Vomited a little in my mouth when i read that.

This is the first and last chapter I have read. Please put future chapters back in the Sci-Fi category. Not sure there is a proper category for this though. Makes me ill.

Human_PrimacyHuman_Primacyalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Wrong Category

Not sure why you would start reading a story at chapter 7, or how one gets disturbed by the sex in a chapter with hardly any sexual content. But thanks for reading, all the same.

The category thing was an error on my part, and a change has been submitted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Well I love the story and can’t wait for more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Different strokes for different folks.

Ignore the chastising comments here. You're doing pretty good work. Undead, zombie, frankenstein-ish type characters in erotica is nothing new. It just requires a 'certain' taste to truly be appreciated. Your description of Eve is well-thought out and not too overboard. If she had rotting tumors or gross puss seeping out of her head, then yeah, it'd be gross. Keep going, I wanna see how this plays out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Well Done

Keep up the good work! I genuinely enjoy the characters and general atmosphere of your story! Would very much be interested in a possible prequel/spin off involving more misadventures of Victoria Stein and her crew! Can't wait for ch 8!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This isn,t necrofelia, she is undead if not resurrected.

Love this story, especially how her creation is dominating her, and the humor elements. Saw all the negatives so very long time reader first time comment leaver. Keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

This is all pretty good, and I am enjoying the story and characters so much that I would honestly still read this even without the lewd parts. Really hope you can get back to this one day since this may be and if my favorite stories on this site.

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