All Comments on 'Ramzan Feast - Blackmail Continues'

Fucking Hottt

WAITED SO LONG FOR THIS

THANK YOU SO MUCH

loving this

Finally

Finish this fast... this is very good, don’t keep us waiting

Just Superbbb

Waiting to see what happens next

Teach them a lesson!!!!

Dear WRITER,

I have a request.

Please finish all of your pending works. They have the potential to be great. Please do not push yourself to write new stories just for the sake of it. Instead kindly work on characters you have already invested time on.

This is a request from somebody you can consider to be a FAN of your writing.

the narration style is really annoying, I wasn't gonna read this and thought ok you read feedback maybe improved this chapter, though the premise is strong the blackmailer is very cartoonish and the way he talks is really annoying and distracting. seems like english isn't your first language

Excellent

Finish the narration and put out more things and get your fun,Ron

teach those bitches a lesson

Definitely, can't wait for more of this... Just curious, will the mother & sister in law be involved also... Cause the way you said they looked at Ron, seemed they wanted him... Also, where is his friend & rest of family while this is happening... Plus, it seemed like the mother sent him to use that bathroom for a reason...