All Comments on 'Ranch Owner'

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PileDriver48PileDriver48over 7 years ago
What I really want

I want Bill and Sally to find happiness with each other. Happily ever after is what we all want and these people deserve for it to happen to them

tendernsweet2tendernsweet2over 7 years ago
What .....

What ever happens in there future in this story just let them be happy things with no boo-who's ~~ ok .? Looking forward to your next story in LC about these two.*

Thx.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Liked the Story

I really enjoyed the story but you need someone to either edit your work or use a spell checker. They're having sex and she starts "bumming?"

Let's see some chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Clearly You've never been on a horse

I liked your story for the most part but you make it hard to enjoy when it's obvious that you have no knowledge of riding. No one rides weari shorts, you legs woul be so chaffed you wouldn't be able to walk.That makes it hard to read the rest of your story.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
If ever there was a story that should be Illustrated

This is that story

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