by Rumple Foreskin
Thisw by no means should be a 1 shot deal. i can't wait to read the rest of the saga. Good job keep it going!!
Keep this going! I like the idea of the female going after the male...
I love the setup - a woman who
know what she wants... Even though
she has to look for it at home :-)
this is a very well written story, and grammatically correct. you should definately finish up all 9 of them
Pretty damn good start! Gotta see more & see whatelse happens & whoelse gets involved or if anyone finds out & how they deal with it etc.! So much potential for this & there is definitely too much potential to have this be a single shot edition!
Jim
At this rate, I'll be having so many cold showers, there won't be a worry about running out of hot water LOL
Definitely continue!!!!!!!
On 'Literotica', it's '5 out of 5' but I agree with the principle principal!
Vividly written, charachters are believable and likable, Jolly good.
A good story that was well written and a real turn on for me. Got me hard.
Excellent writing especially bringing in the aunt.