All Comments on 'Randi Comes Home Ch. 01'

Excellent writing especially bringing in the aunt.

A good story that was well written and a real turn on for me. Got me hard.

interesting, now I have to read the rest of it...

Vividly written, charachters are believable and likable, Jolly good.

On 'Literotica', it's '5 out of 5' but I agree with the principle principal!

At this rate, I'll be having so many cold showers, there won't be a worry about running out of hot water LOL

Definitely continue!!!!!!!

Pretty damn good start! Gotta see more & see whatelse happens & whoelse gets involved or if anyone finds out & how they deal with it etc.! So much potential for this & there is definitely too much potential to have this be a single shot edition!

Jim

this is a very well written story, and grammatically correct. you should definately finish up all 9 of them

great start please write more stories

Poor Pip.

hoping to read more..

I love the setup - a woman who

know what she wants... Even though

she has to look for it at home :-)

Keep it up, baby!

Keep this going! I like the idea of the female going after the male...

Thisw by no means should be a 1 shot deal. i can't wait to read the rest of the saga. Good job keep it going!!