All Comments on 'The Damesdure Raiders Ch. 01'

So this story was a challenge in that I wanted to take more time to develop some aspects but I was already over my usual self-imposed 6.5k word limit. Unlike the Kobold and Siren encounters, I don't feel this story is over yet, so let me know if you'd like me to continue Bien and Gaine's tale.

The story !!!

I enjoyed the short. You gave enough backstory on the characters to give them depth, which is really hard to do with a short story. There are a couple minor grammar errors you could tuneup. If this is the only version of the short story you’re going to do, I would strongly recommend against cliffhangers. It’s completely unsatisfying to have a loose end.

Otherwise, you did very well. I don’t frequent lit erotica often for personal reasons, but quality stories like these are why I still visit from time to time.

I'd love to see more of this, and see where it leads.

Kinda sad the 'curse' is making them so big (though Bien won't be :) ), maybe renegotiate the curse? Or a spell to make mates more, sizeable?

5 Stars!!! I really enjoyed this story and really really hope you continue it!!!!!!

Continue the story, good sir

This is a really nice read. Well written, good character development and simply interesting. Where will it go next? Can’t wait to find out.

Wow! I've never gotten such a positive response on a story before! I'm so glad people are enjoying it. I'll definitely continue this one after the next Random Encounter short. Thank you, everyone, for the kind words!

Interesting. Hope there's going to be lots more.

More! More! I love the story so far. 5 stars. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Please continue this wonderful story. I have a really big fetish for big beautiful muscle bound women. This is perfect for me.

I am glad you continued this series, I am off to read the next two!