All Comments on 'Randy's Husband and Other Problems'

Typical ronde story, well written with a world-weary wryness from a private dick who's at least getting some now. Wonder if we'll hear more from Randy and him.

It doesn't matter what era or format you use for your characters, it is always a delightful read. This was no exception. Love that all your female leads retain their all natural bush and real tits. Randy sure lived up to her name in this one, well done.

You continue to astound covering so many genres competently, and he sounds like a PI, especially one that doesn't care about his health. You got things right about privacy, although I wasn't sure about the Nikon 1300mm lens, as an 800mm is typical for 6500, while the 1300mm are largely manuals and need a tripod; that was the only part of the story I found hard to buy, since that lens is heavy and cannot be hand-held nor bobbing on the water.

Pretty well done. 4

You write better than Mickey Spillane and your nameless PI has a little more savoir faire than Mike Hammer. Carve another notch on the butt of whatever rod your private dick carries, you hit the jackpot again.

Fun story!

5

'Randy is *NOT* a girl's name. Very off-putting.

Nice one take 5 as Brubeck did so well

Great story and well written.

A rip-snorter straight out of the gate. The beginning set the tone for the rest of it. Maybe best story I’ve seen in the private dick genre. Thank you for this supremely fun read!

That was fun!

Loved the one comment comparing him to Mike hammer. Maybe Marlow... I any case another 5* (couldn't resist)!