by i_am_marti
could easily benefit from a sequel or sequels. If you're not the series tupe, keep up the good work anyway. Again, great story.
Why did you do sucha thing lol. At least write about their lives together. But too good to end there
I like this story but it feels like it ended half way through!
I hope there's more to come?
Such a great story. Fantastic to read a great writer who loves her craft as well the eroticism therein :) Searingly erotic, feeling of complete authenticity and great characterization.
Obviously, the GLARING problem is the ending. It's a MUST that you finish quickly LOL I for one am dying to follow the story through
Outstanding achievement, if you don't get some seriously great reviews and a good following something is wrong. Soooo well written and authentically white hot sensuality.
Please give us the rest of the story asap!!!