All Comments on 'Ransom Divorce'

Excellent twist... both of the plot and the knife!!! 5/5!!

nope only 1*

"I was pleasantly surprised when one of the married secretaries ... unbuttoned two buttons on her blouse, ... said, 'I'm willing to do anything to please my boss.'" - what a whore btw

This comment made him an even bigger Bastard then his Bitch of a wife!

She was a cheater (bad enough); he was cheated on and has no problems to be a homewrecker himself (lowest scumm of the earth!)...

Now, if there will ever be a 5.0 Loving Wives story, this is it. Even Harry in VA should approve.

Skippy you did it again. Loved the twist at the end with Marty and Jorge

Thanks for the novel idea, unfortunately it wasn't a very good one. The writing didn't exactly help, though the grammar etc were good the feel of the story was limp and tired, these people showed less emotion than somebody finding their car has a scratch. It also very quickly became obvious that the husband was behind the "kidnapping." Also despite being the victim of a cheating spouse he's more than ready to fuck his married secretary, therefore destroying another marriage, rather hypocritical don't you think?

It did leave some questions though: why, when she discovered she'd been scammed didn't she contact the police? Are all Americans obsessed with money eg. The doctor selling body parts, the cousin lying to their relative, the lover taking a bribe from the man he's cuckolding? And finally do American men hate all women or just their wives?

Sick :) love this story.

🤣🤣😂...5 stars

Loklie

3/5

I would have rated it higher but for the last part.

There was no need for the Husband to have set up the lover.

He could have just BTB & moved on to a better Tomorrow.

Nice one

I love it. Such a fun read . Keep on writing

S47

Great job! The dialogue btwn the husband & the wife had me LMFAO. Reminded me of the dialogue reading one of SS06 stories. There are some classic lines & responses; i was bust’n a gut. 5*

Everyone is a bad guy. Not worth investing.

Sad to say, but these extremes are what a man has to do to come out ahead when divorcing a cheating bitch.

S47, very clever. I quickly caught on that Marty was scamming her, but didn’t see the Jorge angle. Nicely done. Required some suspension of belief, but still a great yarn. Plus , I see you have a couple more stories today, thanks!

Hey buddy, loved it but feel like I want to read more, is there more? Can you make more from this? I personally think this could have a little epic story in it?

Your story...your call.

Either way...well done

Very novel approach!

Good story. Novel burn on the bitch.

"You were never supposed to find out." - Thank you, Captain Obvious! Now, whenever I have an affair, I want to make sure my wife finds out!

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I figured that Jorge was in on it, how else would Marty have known about the ring?

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I have to agree that he was pretty skuzzy to be willing to mess with a married woman.

Original and entertaining; need I say more? 5*

Definitely something different and I liked it.

That's hilarious!

Haa haa fun story

Good story, thanks and 5 stars!

Dark humor. I have to say that Marty wanting to fuck his married secretary was a real low point.

Interesting twist with Marty and Jorge in cahoots. Would rather have seen Jorge's dick and balls in the next parcel. Marty off to spend the 50k he kept after paying off a mobster for his parting Jorge out.

ROFLMAO!

I enjoyed it right up until the end. Small detail, but I would have enjoyed it more if the lover really was on a cruise and was not working with the husband. Then the husband keeps all of the $100k except for what it took to get the body parts. Still, lots of fun even if I figured it out early on. Very original.

Could not stop laughing ! easily 5 stars !

It is morbid.

But one way to get rid of a stupid, low IQ skank.

Predictable but fun.

Semi-interesting plot ruined by 3rd grade writing level talent.

Great story idea but poorly told and woefully full of plot holez. Lots of oppodfunities missed major disappointment 2stars for a brilliant plot idea. It needs the input of a storyteller. Itcould hVe been a 👍 story... but it seriously FAILED DO SAD

Excellent

great story. was a little quick in execution maybe but not bad. 5 stars

Interesting story!

5

Loved the plot and how it turned out but you're writing does come up short. You should really try and improve that part.

Granted, again, this is done in such a way that the simpletons will love it, but so many are such fragile men afraid of women any BTB story, no matter how bad, makes them hard.

Damn

I hate cheating cunts. But, as it goes, all people in this tale were pricks. If I was a different person I'd feel bad for the cheating wife, But nah, not in this lifetime. Fuck her and her lover and her husband. Fuck you, too.

She admitted that she was a slut. Pretty much wind up broke. Should be whoring on a street corner and living in a cardboard box, that would suit her fine!

Normally I support a writer completely but after reading 'Words' comment I had to agree but thank you Skippy for an entertaining tale all the same.

somewhere east of Omaha

Decent story, but he should have sent the cheating bitch a few more body parts before letting her have the divorce.

and I chuckled right to the ending

Good one Skip, l liked it, even though l guessed it was Marty scamming the cheating bitch

5/5

Cool idea ruined by wooden dialogue, stiff narrative flow, and primitive plotting.

I realize it is irrelevant to this author, but why did Selma start fucking Jorge'? Was it Martian Slut Ray? Another cute story about the very clever techniques used by a husband to discover cheating and/or get revenge. But a story about the human aspects would be appreciated.

But thanks for the effort.

Shoulda taken care of Jorge.

He's a lose end.

HAHAHAHA! Very clever.

no one to like here. was the MC till u turned him into a wife fucking asshole. makes me wonder who cheated on who first

Clever. Well written. Thanks for the chuckles.

I got a chuckle out of it.

excellent premise. thought it was just ok though. could see the con coming a mile away. problem is with the lack of emotion. in your other stories, even though they are light/humorous, your characters have personality/emotion. none here

I have seldom laughed like that. A wonderful story told easily and courageously. That was right to my taste. Thank you for sharing!

Well done!

Guess the story one third the way through.

Not a good ending

Great BTB.

3 stars - I like the idea, but it is just too gross for a 5.

Liked it, but I think I would have preferred that Jorge and Marty were not co-conspirators. The husband approaching Jorge was a dangerous move. Jorge could have easily double crossed him, conspired with Selma and got a bigger than $50 K benefit.

Sending on a cruise to hell with no return passage would be a more fitting end, IMO.

I figured it was a scam, when Marty offered the quickie divorce. If it had been a real kidnapping, Marty would have gone directly to the cops, and let them keep Jorge. Marty could have been much harsher in his comments to Selma.

Nice!

Thanks for writing!

Wait, so he gets mad and does this whole scam, because his wife cheats, but then immediately tries to fuck a married woman?

Dude deserved a shitty wife.

Nice con story. I like it a lot. AAAA++++

Nice con, though I'm not sure why he needed to include Jorge in the con!

Oh m'gosh what a hoot!! Funny as all get out. Great story, great con. LP

Too unethical to grant a 5.

I'm sure Jorge thought Selma was a good fuck but $50,000 is $50,000 more than he had plus he still got to fuck Selma. In the end it was Selma the cheater that got fucked over.

If In were Marty, Jorge would have been in a dumpster and I would have kept the 100 G's.

Way to get rid of a cheater wife. I think I would have really kidnapped Jorge and cut off his parts off for real, and Definitely would have sent her his hard cock too..

Once in while man won chesterwife got what she deserved

Really stupid ending. Put the cunt in the new freezer and Jorge in a dumpster.