by Akito01
this is really different to the other stories i have read on here. i really enjoyed this story, very imaginative, you have a lot of talent.
That was simply beautiful. You have a very talented voice and style. Literary and erotic.
This was a really sweet and well-written story but I think it ended far too abrubtly. In one of the versions Rapunzel and the Prince do consumate their love in the tower and the Witch discovers their affair by the ensuing pregnancy. I would have been much more satisfied with that ending, sorry.