All Comments on 'Rare Opportunity'

That was AMAAAAAZING!! Normally, I would analyze the various aspects of the story (dialogue, characterization, pacing, setting, sensuality, etc.)...but one word can sum this one up: PERFECT!!

Wonderful descriptive tale with plentiful action. Not always believable but very rewarding. Nina appeared to be an ideal first time choice if such a woman ever existed.

I find it hard to believe it's your first story. It is very hot and well polished. The pacing is good and keeps you drawn to the story.

I definitely hope you write more.

Thank you.

Very nice job. Not particulary sophisticated or complex plot , but great erotic descriptions of almost all kinds of sexual activity. Very cleverly done without the typical slut wife plot that seems to be the norm lately. Congratulations-- nice, quick entertaining story. 60 year okd George

Absolutely the most erotic story I have read on this site. It is just exceptional. I loved the sensitivity and thoughtfulness of it. Would love to see you write more. You are an outstanding writer.

- Dana