All Comments on 'Rare Opportunity'

by Gladiatorlady

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Exceptional

Absolutely the most erotic story I have read on this site. It is just exceptional. I loved the sensitivity and thoughtfulness of it. Would love to see you write more. You are an outstanding writer.

- Dana

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Truly erotic

Very nice job. Not particulary sophisticated or complex plot , but great erotic descriptions of almost all kinds of sexual activity. Very cleverly done without the typical slut wife plot that seems to be the norm lately. Congratulations-- nice, quick entertaining story. 60 year okd George

DrFreudDrFreudabout 19 years ago
Excellent

I find it hard to believe it's your first story. It is very hot and well polished. The pacing is good and keeps you drawn to the story.

I definitely hope you write more.

Thank you.

gil73gil73about 19 years ago
OUTSTANDING

Wonderful descriptive tale with plentiful action. Not always believable but very rewarding. Nina appeared to be an ideal first time choice if such a woman ever existed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wow!!! Two Thumbs Way Up! (Or Way In!!)

That was AMAAAAAZING!! Normally, I would analyze the various aspects of the story (dialogue, characterization, pacing, setting, sensuality, etc.)...but one word can sum this one up: PERFECT!!

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