All Comments on 'Raven: My Goth Sister'
by SubM
- 15 Comments
motherfucker74over 14 years agoI like to give and receive anal from woman too, BUT when you are talking about deepthroating a cock and what not you clearly have bi intentions. While I don't have a problem with it, that is not my cup of tea. If you categorize this a bit better I would have gave you a better score.
mBrowover 14 years agoDominate is a verb, not a noun, though you often used it as a noun. We have seen this error before on Lit, so you're not alone. See http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/dominate. The word you want is 'dominant', as frequently used here on Lit. Thanks for your efforts, too. The story is interesting, though d/s & anal are not my favorite themes.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI enjoyed it. I would like to see a sequel to see how far it would go.
Anonymousover 14 years agoThis story is a great blend of several fantasy elements (panties, femdom, incest, pegging/strapon). If these are some of your hot buttons, this story should be a delicious good time.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoYeh, a few errors that better proof reading would have sorted, but not too much. Also some of his resistance (or lack of it) seemed a little unlikely. But overall, I'd love to hear more.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoVery nice story. Liked the lead up, the build of anticipation and fear of discovery/reprisal mixed with a genuine feeling of outrage subsumed by lust. I noticed you haven't submitted anything in a while and sincerely hope you haven't given up.
Anonymousover 9 years agoDamn! DAMN!!! Who would have thought that male domination would be so damn ... sexy! DAMN!!!
RodimusMikeover 4 years agoAt first I thought Raven was a cold,cruel Goth bitch,but after finding out she was attracted to her brother Scott I knew she was actually in love with him.Then all the demonstrations of pain then pleasure like when Raven stomped his foot,but then caressing it to appologize,and finally kicking him in the knee was a classic tale of flirting.
But later it was the typical cliche of "Tear him down,to build him up" was Raven's way of showing Scott she loved him and only wanted him,so was Raven wrong in dominating him,hell no,she loved him enough to want to be in his life and dominate him lovingly.This story was beautiful in every way.
RodimusMikeover 2 years agoObviously this is a BDSM Incest story,but is it considered Mild or Heavy,I am not sure.The other thing is whether or not Scott wound up getting to fuck his sister or if she was always the one on top?.
Going by the whole dialog Raven was the total dominant type,but in some instances she clearly showed love and compassion toward Scott,which contradicts her dominant behavior.So does this mean that Raven is somewhat versatile when it comes to sex with her brother?.I hope so and they can end up fucking eachother often.
