All Comments on 'Ravenous Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
BLESS THIS STORY

Praise the lord you finally updated!!! I'm so happy you posted this! I've been missing Kai and Kory! Honestly if you ever finish this up and sell it on Kindle I'll be the FIRST to buy it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Thank You

Thank You for updating this. I'm so excited that they are finally together and it's really beautiful because they are sooo going to get married.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleabout 6 years ago
Why so they have to be quiet?

After all, she SCREAMED when Kai scared the hell out of her and if no one woke up then, they arent going to hear them cheating.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

More please. See I asked nicely

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
So hot

Made me wet. Yum.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Amazing!

Sooo happy to read a new chapter. I want Kory & Kai to be together forever.

VegasloverVegasloverabout 6 years ago

Happy you continued. Going to sleep naked and joined together while your girlfriend is in the next room? Not smart Kai. Especially since she has already been suspicious the whole week. Even if he was going to tell her, he hadn't yet and that is going to be an unneeded shocker. Let's hope Jason, hell even the parents, find them before Lauren does.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I'm desperate

I desperately need more of this story. Please do continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Sick and tired

I am so tired of reading stories with stupid endings. Why didn’t you let us see how Lauren reacted and what their parents thought and what their future held

LudvigBlomSELudvigBlomSEalmost 3 years ago

Just another 5 star story that nose dives in the end by not being properly finished :-(

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please finish this storyyyyy!! ❤️

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