All Comments on 'Ravenswood Ch. 04'

I am glad that the chapters are coming regularly. I look forward to the next one.

It’s a great story and your writing is good but it’s disjointed by mistakes. Please proofread your work or get a friend to. Keep going, I’m rooting for you:)

Eddie

Jason's getting really mysterious at this point. There's clearly a lot more of him to be revealed. I'm betting he's not entirely Human himself. Also, I find it interesting that she doesn't just drink the crook's blood, she also cleanses him of evil at the same time.