All Comments on 'Ravenswood Ch. 13'

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frazod over 5 years ago

Like the way this is expanding. Always did love mage-fighters :).

Like the way she is finding her way. This chapter does seem odd vs. the last one. I dunno seems like more would have been done about Xylia.

Keep writing, I am very interested. I hope Maura stops being a screw-up in the field.

ChasingtheSky over 5 years ago

Good chapter. I wasn't really aware of Maura "picking up" on emotions other than Jason and her family.

Your character development is excellent.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

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