All Comments on 'Ravished by a Classmate During Trip Ch. 02'

I loved the inadvertent exhibitionist aspect of this chapter, although I suppose it's hard to be discreet having such spectacular sex on a crowded bus! You might want to proofread your work before you submit it. A few of your commas were periods, and that results in capital letters after the commas, turning nice compound sentences into fragments. It's such a good story though that it read well despite those snafus. 5*

Thanks, great story. Keep writing!

Give us a part 3 please !!!!

A part three is coming! Thanx for the positivity

I love it!

Hot hot hot 🥵

Definitely want more of this! More more more!

Adding being watched was amazing... need that bus to have a flat and get some more fun going in the dark, maybe with more input from her voyeurs.

This story is Hot AF! Although I do feel like I've been dropped into the middle of an ongoing story... because I have been. (lol)