All Comments on 'RavMe Ch. 01'

Nice build-up to what likely comes next.

I'm very impressed by your writing. This was stylish and smart, veering close to being almost too clever but, in the end, just right. The atmosphere was brilliantly established, and the little references (Horowitz playing Rachmaninoff?!) are priceless. This piece isn't particularly sexy but it is surprisingly educational (in a fun way!) for those who perhaps don't understand the appeal of consensual nonconsent. I will definitely be looking for more from you. Bravo!

The starting idea was very good, but the following chapters are not so good and the story is totally unfinished!

It's incredible but this first chapter that is probably the best has the lower rate of all the series!