All Comments on 'Ray's Ring Ch. 01'

A ring like that could get the boy into trouble.

Interesting story concept, a little spooky and a little out in left field, but I like it.

Thanks for the start

This is going to be GOOD!!!

A nice start to the story line, I like the introduction of the telepathy and the interaction between him and his sister. It will be interesting to see how this develops. I gave it 4* since its a short intro with only a small amount of character/story develpoment.

sorry about the transposition error.