All Comments on 'Re-Kindled Voracity'

One style in constructing sentences that you over-use is to start with a present participle phrase. "Accepting the offer, ...", "Sitting upon her ...", "Grasping her sides, rubbing along her spine, gripping her shoulders ...", "Molding [sic] and kneading and caressing ...". And those are from consecutive sentences; the repetition of style gets tiresome.