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by Newwriter2023

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billie34cbillie34c12 months ago

I liked the premise, how she got trapped but this is brutal. I would love you to rewrite with more finesse.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

"he was a tall, short, fat man" Couldn't you decide on his height? Proofread and edit. Thanks!

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