All Comments on 'Reading Allowed Ch. 01'

Thank you for this story. It's well-written, left me wet and wanting - exactly as a great story should! Her confusion and embarrassment are very well explained, and it will be incredibly pleasurable to read more about how he molds and shapes her from someone who is naturally submissive to the girl of his D/s or BDSM fantasies. I'm already dying for the next chapter!

As the comment said before, it is well written. You captured her fears nicely and that made the story more vivid. By describing her thoughts so well, you enhanced the build up. I am also looking forward to the next installment.

I can certainly relate to the uncomfortness at the bookstore. I'm happy it ended so well for her, I hope the following evening is just as hot.

Very well written.

This is so hot...it gave me a fever!

oh. my. god.

this is the first story i have read of yours..wow can't wait to read on. wow

Thank you zenmackie for a great start to read I know ill have sweet dreams tonight.

I mean... WOW.

How did you hack into my past and pull out such an explosive blend of my own fantasies? yikes.

I am a Mess.

It's also an extraordinarily well-written piece. Thank you!

I agree with everyone else! A very hot story that is told in a manner that made me jealous that it wasnt me. A matter of fact it was so convincing I wonder if it was based on actual events?...if it was...your very lucky...very lucky indeed.

BTW...the beauty series is one of my favs!

So hot loved it can't wait to read the rest