by Zenmackie_lamignonne
I agree with everyone else! A very hot story that is told in a manner that made me jealous that it wasnt me. A matter of fact it was so convincing I wonder if it was based on actual events?...if it was...your very lucky...very lucky indeed.
BTW...the beauty series is one of my favs!
I mean... WOW.
How did you hack into my past and pull out such an explosive blend of my own fantasies? yikes.
I am a Mess.
It's also an extraordinarily well-written piece. Thank you!
Thank you zenmackie for a great start to read I know ill have sweet dreams tonight.
this is the first story i have read of yours..wow can't wait to read on. wow
I can certainly relate to the uncomfortness at the bookstore. I'm happy it ended so well for her, I hope the following evening is just as hot.
Very well written.
As the comment said before, it is well written. You captured her fears nicely and that made the story more vivid. By describing her thoughts so well, you enhanced the build up. I am also looking forward to the next installment.
Thank you for this story. It's well-written, left me wet and wanting - exactly as a great story should! Her confusion and embarrassment are very well explained, and it will be incredibly pleasurable to read more about how he molds and shapes her from someone who is naturally submissive to the girl of his D/s or BDSM fantasies. I'm already dying for the next chapter!